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The Strangeness of Rain Falling Amidst Birdsong

Everywhere today, the misting sound that seems to cling
  to every leaf and each blade of grass like an oration
   that speaks a thing into being
Talk to me of inspiration at the moment when it first fills
  the whole body with something solid and unyielding
Bend my ear with how that thin veneer obviously means so
  much more than the weather and how wet it is outside
And under the evident drizzle
  less than the saturation of potential prisms on everything
   surrounding as far as these eyes now see
    as far as I might ever need to write about anything (muse)
    where melodic car alarms or snooze buttons interrupt
    I believe I can be thankful for headaches in still life
I believe I can be thankful for the heartbeat uncorrupt
  and one good eye, one good ear and tomorrow
   even though the forecast is for dry
    I will hum along to that birdsong though the words escape me
It will never be too rainy a day for that

                                                                                FRS
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This had something to do with rain, something to do with headaches, something to do with muses, something to do with headaches, something to do with sex, something to do with birds that sound like car alarms, something to do with time travel, something to do with time traveling sex, something to do with taxes (maybe) and sex and headaches - but mainly muses....and headaches.

At the end, I feel like repeating the line three or four times - just to get the message across. If I were to read it aloud, I would add those lines increasing in volume with each one.

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Ah this is one of those poems that leaves you wanting to leave an awesome/witty comment, but knocks you speechless at the same time, you know?

--
we're more than artists, we're works of art.
~artistic-advancement
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time traveling sex? how does that work?

--
"I have an ATM in my pants..."
-me...

Everyone has the right to make an ass out of themselves, except you.

***92% of the teens have moved onto rap. If you are part of the 8% that still listens to real music, copy and paste this into your name.
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If you went back in time, wouldn't you at least think about having sex with yourself? It would all be masturbation anyway, so masturbation is a form of time traveling sex. Sometimes inspriation isn't the only thing that fills you with something hard and unyeilding.

--
F. R. Smith
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...ya. you lost me.

--
"I have an ATM in my pants..."
-me...

Everyone has the right to make an ass out of themselves, except you.

***92% of the teens have moved onto rap. If you are part of the 8% that still listens to real music, copy and paste this into your name.

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